Von replied to the topic [40K] Matters of Protocol in the forum = All Fiction...
Lemuel kept his face gargoyle-still, impenetrable. “Be that as it may, my instructions – ” “Are doubtless fictions concoted to mislead me and are thus of no interest. Don’t waste your breath on telling...
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Don’t spend too much time dwelling on past indiscretions guys. Learn from them and move on. you are older and wiser now; so is most everyone else; and sees your indiscretions, as well as their own,...
View ArticleVon replied to the topic [40K] Matters of Protocol in the forum = All Fiction...
Hmm. Can’t edit posts, and the CODE function seems to be gone. That’s interesting. I’m not sure about the naming convention in this part. It was tempting to refer to the characters by their real names,...
View ArticleVon replied to the topic [40K] Matters of Protocol in the forum = All Fiction...
I really like the inter-play in the dialogue, though I do wonder would Astartes speak that way, even amongst themselves? Or even especially amongst themselves being of different Chapters. I was going...
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I kind of like Dietrich’s Warp-vision. It doesn’t have the same sense of immanent peril to it, and I agree that for flow’s sake it might compromise the mood a bit, but it’s different… the Warp as...
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Drip… Drip… Drip… A tiny sound, this drip-drip-drip of water, but somehow resonant. Each falling drop punctured a silence, aeons-deep, thick and cold as the pack ice on which it splashed. Each splash...
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I’m very keen to know what you think of my fiction, Von – your opinion is most welcome. Would you check out my Judas Gospel short? I have done. Still mustering the intelligent commentary, or trying to,...
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The first of them to stir was a presence that had never truly slept. In a maze of thought within the maze of ice and metal, it stirred and hungered, drawn by the rapacity of gods to raven at the red...
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Not bad, if I’m honest. Not brilliant – Red Dwarf will not be brilliant again until Rob Grant realises that actually he’d be really smeggin’ lucky if his particular lightning strikes twice, gets over...
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“Waaaaagh!” The cry went up from the orks who mustered to every side, clinging tight to the sides of the pit. Hundreds of deep, throaty voices boomed and howled down from the high walls, underscored by...
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<blockquote><em>High above the Black Planet, so far out that it’s barely in orbit at all, there spins an industry-blighted little rock which the human colonists below have dubbed...
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The learned Dr. Shiny is among my longest-serving opponents. Our respective armies – Skaven and Vampire Counts, Eldar and Chaos Space Marines, or Khador and Cryx – have been battering each other with...
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